Something is off with them tig ole bitties, she's facing the viewer at an angle, but the areola aren't. Considering her pose, you did good with the perspective otherwise.

Also watch out with your ETMA rating.

Aw nice, the Breath of Air is a classic kiss trope. One that's a must in these kinds of stories.

Great flow in your panel work.

I think the only problem I have is the barbed arrows came out really easy, but nice job.

Her right arm elbow placement looks a little off to me, but as usual nice job.

Good pose too, keeps with her character.